recount about yoga

PLANNING FOR WRITING.

INTRODUCTION:

WHAT: partner yoga challenge

WHERE: inside Room 7

WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning

WHO: Room 7 students

WHY: have fun

HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.

KEYWORDS

• Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,

PARAGRAPH 1:

• Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
• Miss explained what we were doing
• First pose -  easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner

PARAGRAPH 2:

• Challenging
• Making shapes with our bodies
• Keeping calm, trying your best
• Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
• Which ones were really HARD?

PARAGRAPH 3:

• Most complex or difficult poses..
• Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
• Which ones were really HARD?

CONCLUSION:

• My favourite one was..
• The hardest one was...

On monday 17th of September 2018 room 7 students were split up into two groups so we could play the yoga challenge to have fun my buddy was Fereti, when miss was putting the first picture we were so excited for the first round.

Paragraph 1

When the first picture came it was so challenging for me but when I looked again to the picture I was starting to get the moves Correctly, the first step that I did is to fold Your legs and hold the hands and pull. The next picture that I have to do is to hold your buddies hand to put the feet at the top touching the other person's feet, if your done hold your buddies hand.

Paragraph 2

“Oh no” I said this is gonna be hard because me and my buddie have to push our body up and my buddy has to go at top of my body I was so terrified because Fereti might get really hurt so I went and told him not to do.

When last round came I told fereti not to do the last one because you have to flip and try not fall.

Paragraph 3: conclusion

I would never do this again because it almost made me puke because I was so tired could not breathe because I was coughtfing to much.

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