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Thursday, April 12, 2018

bean boozled

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Bean Boozled challenge!!!

On thursday 12th of April we were doing the bean boozled challenge.  At tamaki primary school in room 7 Ms.Ashley was given a bean boozled from Ms.Komor for christmas last year and she wanted to she it with her class room 7.

So she brought her bean boozled to class in room 7.
When we were ready she told us the flavors but when she also lifted the cap then it smelt like coconut for me but not for my friend Railey.

When the first volunteer Keru had got grass he said “YUCKY!!!” Then the next volunteer was Lopi and he got spoiled milk his heart was beating  after Lopi it was Michael’s turn when it was his turn he was so nervous but got a lime looking grass bean boozled like Keru.

So after 20 more people it was me and Railey’s turn I got licorice but I said this is nice but Railey got spoiled milk but he said “THIS IS SO YUCK” .

So we had a break from eating the bean boozled but all of us said “NO!!!” We don't want to stop.

So we did a round 2
Lopi and keru went and keru got boogers, lopi got grass
Tipene smells like licorice, michael got barf
Fereti has popcorn, dwyane got tutti frutti
Vina licorice, hiria pear.. But really lawn
Maria caramel corn, maani got tutti frutti.
Timote got lawn, but Kordell got popcorn
Team of 4
Hope got coconut, waiari got barf, Ana got dog food, lily has gotin tutti frutti
Team of 4
Railey spoiled milk, Paula - ???
Havea - got boogers
Leon got grass
Reign - got licorice
Davlyn - got caramel popcorn


Wednesday, April 11, 2018

crossing the bridge

Crossing the bridge


On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow. The farmer’s name was called Peaches.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and Struggled to move her heavy cow.  “ come on Bessie.” She said as she was struggling to pull Bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to William Johnson the toll keeper. She gave William Johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnson” she said as she was waiting to cross the bridge.

William Johnson took the money and said “Thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William Johnson used his strength to turn the winch so that the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market. The farmer and the cow got to the market and the farmer got the bucket and milked the cow to sell the milk to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and she said “ WOOPHE!!!, That's the best milk i've ever tasted.” So she bought some milk and took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. Then he got to the last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her cow home.

Then they got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.



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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence

Speech marks when people are talking

Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘

Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards

Interesting and difficult adjectives
Only winch. Need more.
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Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
Where, why, how
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
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Ideas/events in the right order

3 paragraphs

Metaphors and similes

Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex