narritives

There was man named Axel Blevins  he wanted to make his dream come true by jumping of the tallest waterfall.

Me and my friends took a minivan there.We had to make a pot stop to food and gas when we got there we had to do a barbarcar to cook.Some of us went into the sea and had a swim.

After the long swim they went to hunt some animals to have something to eat for their lunch. Also they went and got some water for the lunch.Later on me and john went looking for the water when we found it we told the rest of the crew to first we munch than we go.After we munched we went to the waterfall and jumped off after that we went home.

music

Today i learned how to play twinkle twinkle star and this old man on a piano

no escape

WALT about setting and characters

find three descriptive language

twinkle twinkle star colours

south by the southern cross

put around it

introduction

One beautiful bright sunny day in a faraway land there was a young man called Josh. This guy who lost in a dark creepy forest with a creep old wheelchair he was so scared because he might get bitten by the old witch that goes around the creepy forest.   .

peter losts sister

Once upon a time a boy named Peter went to the market to buy bread and fish. He got money from his guardian. When he went through the market he saw a fortune teller. He wanted to go there but his guardian told him to buy bread and fish but he followed his passion and went to the fortune teller.

Peter thought the fortune teller was a little bit dodgy because it was only $1 per person. He went in with fear and knew he was getting scammed. He went to him and put the dollar in with a little shake. The teller said “Your sister is still alive just try and believe me”.

Peter knew it was a huge mistake he made by going in the fortune teller, Because he knew that the sister died from cancer. He went home to his guardian and then he just did not lie to the guardian.

He followed his heart and he didn't lie to the guardian. He  came empty handed to his guardian and the guardian said “Follow your passion and it will lead the way”. THE END

reading task

narritives

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Car crash
Intro 2 sentences	One amazing Evening  I was driving back with my son called jax and his dad called axel  to celebrate my son’s 6 birthday axel son is so excited for his 6 birthday
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	on monday 6 of may.We were about to go home but suddenly we crash into a pole because i was driving so fast it flipped and crash into the pole. Axel son said im terrified axel said don’t worry it will be ok.
Problem 5-10 sentences	People called the police helow the police said help the people said there is a crash happening here we need help now before the car exploded. I was so frightened to my head and toes because my is gonna explode for a 50 minutes.
Solution 5-10 sentences	The fire service, police and the ambulance was coming i heard siren help help i said the fire service used the jaws of life to the car into half fast i said the is gonna explode for about 5 more minutes
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	On that day we got out because of the fire service cut the car in half. Thank you very much officer for cutting the car so it won’t explode.

week 9 reading

make your own rocket

reading task thursday

room7 co-constructed narrative

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative

Labels: writing

House on fire

Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming

Put the fire out with water hoses

Smoke is strong

Problem - there might be people inside?!

PS4 is still inside. - valuables

Clothes are inside.

Might be cats or dogs inside

Food is inside

Playing with matches

Fireplace

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.

Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Title	Fire in the house
Introduction	One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation	Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem	Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution	Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion	The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

the wood

                              Writing a narrative

On a scary day we went camping and we were just looking for some wood and we found a scary house.

While I was in the woods I felt a little shiver going up my spine which made me more sacred just like we are being watched. Everyone stayed calm but one was scared because someone might be a Wicked witch living in that creepy demented house. There I went in the house, we knew we had to investigate so we found blood on the floor and we Got crept out. Went up to the 2nd floor  and found a knife and it had blood on it so we pick it up so we can be armed so if some wrong happens we can fight back.

After awhile I saw someone going in a room and he disappear then we found out he was a ghost. It was so fast we can’t even catch him but then i saw secret room and i found  behind the bookcase it was a door noob so we opened it it was a scary room and then i saw the same man on a photo the wall then we knew this man it was the council of our camp and his name was jeff the killer because he went to jail for killing people. We knew we could not call the cops because there was no service. So we locked him up in chains and left him there.

Jeff’s story

reading task 2

monday reading group

describing charecter

narrative about fortnite

Fortnite is thing when people team up and vs with other people. This one is about when 50 people vs 50 people the one that i see in this picture shooting grenade launchers and shooting with other stuff

solar system

long summer and witer

season 2

how do season work

narritives

The beautiful night sky with the gigantic moon facing our beautiful planet earth.above the ocean there is a big gigantic trees that looks like a pohutukawa tree with red beautiful red flowers.  

moon activit1

reading activity friday

           If I was a Zeelonite

Okay today is the day i go to the zoo for the day it should be fun to see the amazing stuff that is there . “After awhile” I said to the cashire Hi i will like 2 tickets please I said okay here is the money  thank you said the cashery here is your 2 tickets thank you. I am very excited and happy today weeeeee! Man there is too much things to choose from like the amazing humans or the zeelonite wait i just said amazing humans I think I should go there first.  “after spending so much time at the zoo” Finally i’m home I think I should make me some food then go to bed but first i should get something from the shop then i go to bed.

“In the next day” I just want to stay home today.The End

chaining

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moon activity2

phase of the moon

This is a photo of me and my friends like Davlyn, Railey and Havea doing the different moon’s there are with oreos. We were learning about what are the phase of the moon.

how tide works

bouncy castle

                                                      

Yesterday it was the best day ever because Milan has won a bouncy castle in point england

moon phase

solar energy

water pollution drwing