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Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Car crash
Intro 2 sentences	One amazing Evening  I was driving back with my son called jax and his dad called axel  to celebrate my son’s 6 birthday axel son is so excited for his 6 birthday
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	on monday 6 of may.We were about to go home but suddenly we crash into a pole because i was driving so fast it flipped and crash into the pole. Axel son said im terrified axel said don’t worry it will be ok.
Problem 5-10 sentences	People called the police helow the police said help the people said there is a crash happening here we need help now before the car exploded. I was so frightened to my head and toes because my is gonna explode for a 50 minutes.
Solution 5-10 sentences	The fire service, police and the ambulance was coming i heard siren help help i said the fire service used the jaws of life to the car into half fast i said the is gonna explode for about 5 more minutes
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	On that day we got out because of the fire service cut the car in half. Thank you very much officer for cutting the car so it won’t explode.