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Wednesday, July 4, 2018

walking in the woods


Brainstorm of ideas - sonny day and light dirt.

Describing character/setting - they are walking on light brown dirt on a bright sunny day on a wednesday, they are holding some metal sticks

Ideas for the problem - one of them might trip on a rock that is deep into the ground and broke their leg.

Ideas for the solution - they used aid kit

Start here:
On a sony day me and my mate paula went for a hike first we had to pack our stuff like first aid kit,bange, drink bottle,axe and our bag. When we were about to go we were so excited because this is the first time we did this.

So then they went out and started the walk then they started to run then they stopped for a drink then ran again. Then paula askilenly tripped on a rock that was deep into the ground and broke his leg.

When paula was tripped on the rock and broke his leg i went into my bag and grabbed my aid kit and put the bandages around it. Then I called the ambulance and the ambulance and took him to the hospital.

maths question

speech


Hi, Thank you for participating in our amazing effort and work. My name Havea and my best buddy is Railey, We Found interesting facts about the astronomers, Today we are gonna tell you a question about who were the early astronomers. The three people that we have researched are Galileo, Albert Einstein and Isaac Newton. These are the people that one time in there life have discovered something new to our wonderful earth. Galileo discovered the io, rings of saturn and Isaac Newton is a good guy that invented the radio telescope and Reflecting telescope . Albert einstein invented the one only einstein Refrigerator and Gas absorption heat pump. I hope you enjoy our wonderful board of information!!

Monday, July 2, 2018

WALT how to use dialogue in our writing


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking
How to put in other punctuation
They go before the speech markA
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
2 or more people are talking
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely,scream
EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
One beautiful and sunny day three bff’s were going to adventure park at Leon’s house.
 Railey asked “what should food should we get?”
Leon replied “We should get 3 boxes of pizza, 3 boxes of popcorn and 3 shape boxes also a lot of soda”

Fereti said “That will be a great idea Leon we will have the greatest adventure ever created from human kind!”

Friday, June 29, 2018

narritives


There was man named Axel Blevins  he wanted to make his dream come true by jumping of the tallest waterfall.

Me and my friends took a minivan there.We had to make a pot stop to food and gas when we got there we had to do a barbarcar to cook.Some of us went into the sea and had a swim.

After the long swim they went to hunt some animals to have something to eat for their lunch. Also they went and got some water for the lunch.Later on me and john went looking for the water when we found it we told the rest of the crew to first we munch than we go.After we munched we went to the waterfall and jumped off after that we went home.

music

Today i learned how to play twinkle twinkle star and this old man on a piano

no escape

WALT about setting and characters

find three descriptive language

twinkle twinkle star colours

south by the southern cross

Thursday, June 28, 2018

put around it

introduction

One beautiful bright sunny day in a faraway land there was a young man called Josh. This guy who lost in a dark creepy forest with a creep old wheelchair he was so scared because he might get bitten by the old witch that goes around the creepy forest.   .

peter losts sister


Once upon a time a boy named Peter went to the market to buy bread and fish. He got money from his guardian. When he went through the market he saw a fortune teller. He wanted to go there but his guardian told him to buy bread and fish but he followed his passion and went to the fortune teller.



Peter thought the fortune teller was a little bit dodgy because it was only $1 per person. He went in with fear and knew he was getting scammed. He went to him and put the dollar in with a little shake. The teller said “Your sister is still alive just try and believe me”.
Peter knew it was a huge mistake he made by going in the fortune teller, Because he knew that the sister died from cancer. He went home to his guardian and then he just did not lie to the guardian.


He followed his heart and he didn't lie to the guardian. He  came empty handed to his guardian and the guardian said “Follow your passion and it will lead the way”. THE END

reading task

Tuesday, June 26, 2018

narritives

Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.

Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.



Title:
Car crash
Intro
2 sentences
One amazing Evening  I was driving back with my son called jax and his dad called axel  to celebrate my son’s 6 birthday axel son is so excited for his 6 birthday
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
on monday 6 of may.We were about to go home but suddenly we crash into a pole because i was driving so fast it flipped and crash into the pole. Axel son said im terrified axel said don’t worry it will be ok.
Problem
5-10 sentences
People called the police helow the police said help the people said there is a crash happening here we need help now before the car exploded.
I was so frightened to my head and toes because my is gonna explode for a 50 minutes.
Solution
5-10 sentences
The fire service, police and the ambulance was coming i heard siren help help i said the fire service used the jaws of life to the car into half fast i said the is gonna explode for about 5 more minutes
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
On that day we got out because of the fire service cut the car in half. Thank you very much officer for cutting the car so it won’t explode.

Monday, June 25, 2018

Friday, June 22, 2018

Thursday, June 21, 2018

reading task thursday

room7 co-constructed narrative

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing

Image result for fire house
House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hoses
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside
Food is inside
Playing with matches
Fireplace
Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.


Title
Fire in the house
Introduction
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Tuesday, June 19, 2018

the wood

                              Writing a narrative

On a scary day we went camping and we were just looking for some wood and we found a scary house.

While I was in the woods I felt a little shiver going up my spine which made me more sacred just like we are being watched. Everyone stayed calm but one was scared because someone might be a Wicked witch living in that creepy demented house. There I went in the house, we knew we had to investigate so we found blood on the floor and we Got crept out. Went up to the 2nd floor  and found a knife and it had blood on it so we pick it up so we can be armed so if some wrong happens we can fight back.


After awhile I saw someone going in a room and he disappear then we found out he was a ghost. It was so fast we can’t even catch him but then i saw secret room and i found  behind the bookcase it was a door noob so we opened it it was a scary room and then i saw the same man on a photo the wall then we knew this man it was the council of our camp and his name was jeff the killer because he went to jail for killing people. We knew we could not call the cops because there was no service. So we locked him up in chains and left him there.








reading task 2

Monday, June 18, 2018

Friday, June 15, 2018

describing charecter

narrative about fortnite

Image result for fortnite

Fortnite is thing when people team up and vs with other people. This one is about when 50 people vs 50 people the one that i see in this picture shooting grenade launchers and shooting with other stuff

solar system

long summer and witer

season 2

how do season work

narritives

The beautiful night sky with the gigantic moon facing our beautiful planet earth.above the ocean there is a big gigantic trees that looks like a pohutukawa tree with red beautiful red flowers.  

moon activit1

reading activity friday

           If I was a Zeelonite
Okay today is the day i go to the zoo for the day it should be fun to see the amazing stuff that is there . “After awhile” I said to the cashire Hi i will like 2 tickets please I said okay here is the money  thank you said the cashery here is your 2 tickets thank you. I am very excited and happy today weeeeee! Man there is too much things to choose from like the amazing humans or the zeelonite wait i just said amazing humans I think I should go there first.  “after spending so much time at the zoo” Finally i’m home I think I should make me some food then go to bed but first i should get something from the shop then i go to bed.

“In the next day” I just want to stay home today.The End

chaining


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Wednesday, June 13, 2018

Friday, June 8, 2018

phase of the moon


This is a photo of me and my friends like Davlyn, Railey and Havea doing the different moon’s there are with oreos. We were learning about what are the phase of the moon.

how tide works

bouncy castle

                                                      

Yesterday it was the best day ever because Milan has won a bouncy castle in point england

Thursday, June 7, 2018

Friday, May 25, 2018

writing practice test

                                    Image result for sun
                                                   The sun sol
introduction
The sun sol is a dwarf star and it is made out of solar energy. Sun gives us heat and light because if we don’t have heat we will be a frozen ball and we will just fly away. That's why we need the sun to keep us stay and normal.

Temperature
The temperature of the sun is about 56,000 degrees and it is the hottest dwarf star because it is full of solar energy and gas. The hottest part of the sun is its core.

Conclusion
The sun is a gigantic hot star and it is on middle of the solar system. Sun is known as the sol because it is part of solar system.


Ideas

S&L
Organi.
Vocab
Sent. Str.
Punct.
Spelling

seasons

Why do we have seasons?

Watch the video and go on the websites to find answers to the questions below.

How many times a year does the earth go around the sun?
once
Which way does the sun appear to move across the sky?east to west
What hemisphere is New Zealand in?
autumn

What months do we have spring in?
september
Write two paragraphs about your favourite season in the space below.

I like summer because you could go beach.

And i like autumn because the temperature is nice
Why are our seasons at different times of the year to other parts of the world?

Because we are in the southern hemisphere and they are the northern hemisphere so we get more sun at different times in the year
If New Zealand is in summer, what season would it be in North america?
it would be spring
What is the axis?
Axis is like rotate
The Equator.
The Equator is an imaginary circle around Earth. It divides Earth into two equal parts: the Northern Hemisphere and the Southern Hemisphere. It runs halfway between the North and South poles. The distance around the Equator is about 24,900 miles (40,000 kilometers).

Look at the videos and pictures below and answer the questions


What is the line going across the picture?

It is showing us the middle of the earth

What do you think the colours represent in the picture?
The brown one represent the sand
And the green represent the land
How do seasonal changes affect plants and animals?

If it's winter the animals will get hibernate and plants will not grow
If we could see New Zealand on this picture what colour do you think it would be? green
Why are the countries that are close to the equator always hot?
It is because the sun is facing them
Where is the northern hemisphere
Northern is at top

where is the southern hemisphere?
Sothern is at bottom









neptune

Facts about Neptune

Neptune was the first plant to be discovered only through mathematical calculations rather than astronomical observations.
Neptune is the eighth planet from the Sun making it the most distant in the solar system.  Gas giant planet caThiss formed much closer to the Sun in early solar system. Also Neptune is unique for being a big blue ball of ice and neptune is called a gas giant and also it does not have mountains for not having any solid surface. It takes 168 years for neptune to orbit the sun-Leon

Climate/Temperature
Do you know that neptune temperature is about 214 cecilus and did you know why neptune is really cold,it is because neptune is the farest from the sun/sol. Neptune is the strangest planet on the solar system because when  nasa discovered neptune they were searching some mysterious about the planet, well they got something it was the wind going on those winds is extremely high.

Discovery
Neptune was discovered in the year 1846, The discoverers of Neptune were John Adams,Johann Gottfried and Urbain Verrier he did poetry in his life. Did you know that Neptune was discovered on the 23rd September 1846. The discoverers were John Adams, Johann Gottfried and Urbain Verrier. Johann GottFried did poetry and literacy to.

Feature’s
The features to neptune is it has lots of storms, tornados also cold, dark, windy and mysterious Uranus, Neptune's blue color is the result of red light being absorbed by methane gas in the planet's upper atmosphere.

Location
Neptune is the farest planet from the sun. it A icy gas giant. Mercury venus earth and mass are small planets because the sun gives the hydrogen ti the planets.

Conclusion
People can’t live in Neptune because they could freeze. Also people would die  because they can’t make plants like vegetables, also their shelter will break because of the tornados and bad Disasters that happened there, And they could not have anyThing to eat.

By Havea, Leon, Railey, Reign and Michael.