My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity. I am super happy to hear that you also enjoyed this activity.
I think your haiku is very well written, it fits in with the theme of summer and I thought it was also quite funny that you added a rhyme with sun, bun and run. To step up this post you could include a few more haikus and even post a video of you reading them aloud.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Railey,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this haiku activity as I love to read poetry and I think haikus are a very fun form of poetry with their syllable rules and simplicity. I am super happy to hear that you also enjoyed this activity.
I think your haiku is very well written, it fits in with the theme of summer and I thought it was also quite funny that you added a rhyme with sun, bun and run. To step up this post you could include a few more haikus and even post a video of you reading them aloud.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates