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Monday, April 20, 2020

visual dictionary


Strain    -Type of something
Claiming  -Real sickness
Severe  -Undesirable     
Haemorrhage - when you bleed inside
Pneumonia  -You're Filled with fluid 
Cyanosis  -Skin changes colour.
Fluid - kinda like a water flowing

This flu in 1918 was like the plague because they both go for your lung and then you get less oxygen so your skin changes. The strain was similar to the plague because it changes the skin when they die, the skin changes because the lungs gets flooded with liquid so it is difficult to breathe like the plague but it does not fill up with liquid.

The strain affected ages of 20 to 40 years old.


Thursday, April 16, 2020

why we should stay for 4 more weeks

Link to yesterday’s resource


Topic: Should we stay in isolation longer than 4 weeks?
Pro (agree/positive things)
Con (disagree/negative things)
MONEY
Keep us safe
 Don’t have to spend a lot of money
 Save money because I can’t go shopping/not paying for petrol
Government is giving people a ‘wage subsidy’ if they loose their jobs so they can still pay their bills and get food

RELAX/FUN/HOLIDAYS
 Lots of naps during the day
Get to watch lots of TV
 Nobody can tell you to go play outside because you aren’t allowed outside

FAMILY/WHANAU/SOCIAL
Look after mum,dad,sisters and brother.
 Spend time with family
Family day
Play games with family.
The longer we are in lockdown the more spending time with family.
Have fun with family.
To stay with your family's more

CHORES
 More time to clean house


SAFETY
Staying safe from strangers
The more you follow the law the more that the lockdown will be shorter.
Stay 2 meter away from strangers.
Less chances on getting  corona



SCHOOL
Not going to school
 Miss my friends
I Miss going on trips.
Swimming got canceled
Miss school
Your parents tell you to do too much work

FOOD /RESOURCES
 Cooking at home - I miss takeaways lol
I miss burger kings, and other food.🍔


Might run out of food
Running out of toilet paper.

ENTERTAINMENT/TIME
Boring  if you didn’t have internet
Not Going to akedo sessions (weekend/after school activities)
Not being able to play sports
Not being able to go
Have to do chores - toilets.
Not being able to go to parks to see friends

TRAVEL
 I Miss going on trips.
 Not being able to see other family members
 Miss seeing friends in reality
Family games
I miss spending time on birthdays. (no parties)😭

Can’t travel - can’t visit people overseas
Can't get over seas to see family's member
People can’t travel around the world
Towns getting closed.🗺️



BUSINESSES
The longer the lockdown goes, the harder it will be for them to reopen.
Not enough money to pay their workers.

MEDICAL
People not being able to get healed because doctors closed


We have a timer./2:00hors

Intro
Statement
Opinion
Reasons

New Zealand is currently in its 3rd week of a strict lockdown during the Coronavirus Pandemic. A highly debated topic is “Should lockdown last more than 4 weeks?-”. I think it should/should not last longer than 4 weeks.

Pro: People’s money is heavily impacted, they have to stay home in their “bubbles” with their families, but it keeps them safe.

Con: Children can’t go to school, people might run out of food or other resources, and can’t travel.


Here is my writing.

New Zealand is currently in its 3rd week of a strict lockdown during the Coronavirus Pandemic. A highly debated topic is “Should lockdown last more than 4 weeks?-”. I think it should last longer than 4 weeks. People’s money is heavily impacted, they have to stay home in their “bubbles” with their families, but it keeps them safe.

1: money
For the word “Money” I think it's a great idea to last another 4 weeks because by the time another virus comes we won't be able to work for money and so we must save them and spend them wisely.




2: safety
For our safety I think lasting another 4 week is brilliant because we never know if it's alright to go out. And by the time we go out of the house people might be still sick.




3: bubbles
For my opinion i think staying at home is the safest way to stay away from people for 2 meters and to stay away from strangers.

In conclusion, I think it will be best if the lockdown lasts longer than 4 weeks so we can all be protected from Coronavirus.





New Zealand is currently in its 3rd week of a strict lockdown during the Coronavirus Pandemic. A highly debated topic is “Should lockdown last more than 4 weeks?-”. I think it should/should not last longer than 4 weeks.

Pro: People’s money is heavily impacted, they have to stay home in their “bubbles” with their families, but it keeps them safe.




vocab

RMS Niagara-name of a ship
Royal mail ship.

Quarantine-a state of period, or place of isolation in which people or animals that have arrived from elsewhere or been exposed to infectious or contagious disease are placed.

Docked- a ship


Epidemic- and epidemic is a disease that affects a large number of people within a community, population, or region.

Unaffected- feeling or showing no effects or changes. 

Tangi- its a funeral.

Urupa- its a place where u put a body underground when u DIE!!!

tomato mixed with yummy  source - means where something comes from.
- RMS-royal mail           
- Niagara-named after a waterfall
- when it was built-1912
- where it came from-scottish company
- who was the captain-    
Length: 524.7 feet (159.9 m)
Beam: 66.3 feet (20.2 m)
Draught: 28 feet 1 inch (8.56 m)


Wednesday, April 15, 2020

example of persuasive writing


Persuasive writing!


Sentence starters…

Good writing
Better writing
Best writing
I think
I believe that
In my opinion
I agree that
I disagree because
My first reason is
My second reason is
My third reason is
Finally
In conclusion
I’m absolutely certain that
Another argument is
To start with, 
It is important to, 
Clearly,
Everyone knows that
The fact is
The truth is
Without a doubt
Most people would agree that
Doesn’t everyone know that…?
Just imagine 
It is obvious
It contradicts 
Although both sides have valid arguments,
In comparison,
However,
Although, 
In light of this, 
On the contrary, 
Even though
Similarly, 
It would be worthwhile if
It would be beneficial if
The fact is disputed 

Example